Sprawdzenie czy jest dobrze - mail po Angielsku.

[piotrek54PL]

Muszę napisać list do znajomego że przyjechała do mnie dawno nie widziana kuzynka i ma opowiedzieć jak zmienił się jej wygląd i styl ubierania się. Sprawdzcie proszę czy jest on dobrze:

 

Hi Tom !

Do you remember Ellen ? She is my cousin and she arrived to me yesterday ! I don't see her 3 years ! Last time when i saw she, she was short, blond hair. Now Ellen have long, dark hair and lots of earrrings. She is good-looking and tall. She wear fasionable boots and tight jeans, she is beatiful. I can't wait for you reply

See you. XYZ

 

Mam to na jutro więc proszę pisac odrazu bezbłędnie jak ktoś znajdzie jakiś błąd. Daje lajki !

[Suchy™]

Do you remember Ellen ? She is my cousin and she has arrived to me yesterday! I haven't seen her for 3 years! Last time when i saw her, she was short, blond haired. Now Ellen have long, dark hair and wears lots of earrings. She is good-looking and tall. She wears fasionable boots and tight jeans, she is beatiful. I can't wait for your reply

 

Można to trochę ubarwić, np.:

 

Hi ZZZ!

Do you remember Ellen? She is my cousin and she has arrived to me yesterday! I haven't seen her for 3 years! Last time when I saw her, she was short, blond haired. Now Ellen have long, dark hair and wears lots of earrings. She is good-looking girl, moreover she's tall. She wears fasionable boots and tight jeans - that makes her look beautiful. I can't wait for your reply.

Best regards,

XYZ.

 

P.S. nie jaraj się kuzynką :<

 

Może coś tam jeszcze jest

[piotrek54PL]

Wieeeelkie dzieki ! Like oczywiscie poszedl i 5 w profilu

Jeszcze raz dzieki !

[natan1234]

Do you remember Ellen ? She is my cousin and she arrived to me yesterday ! I didn't seen her for 3 years ! Last time when i saw her she was short and had blond hair. Now shes has long dark hair and wears lot of earrrings. Shes beautiful and tall. She wears fasionable boots and tight jeans and she looks beautiful! I can't wait for you reply!

Czerwone= zmienione czyli nie tak zły "inglish" masz ;d