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[Are3ki]

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Hey John
 I'm writing to you, because I want to tell you about my last meeting with Carl. He was our class mate in primary school, I hope you remember him!

 The last time i saw him he was rather plump and lazy . And now? He's tall and well built. But one thing hasn't changed, he's still lazy! We've met at the skate park. We've spent there all evening!

 I'm going to have a meeting with him at skate park again tomorrow! How would you go with us too? You should see him!

Write me back soon!
XYZ
 

[9Jarek9]

1. "classmate" zamiast "class mate"

2. "And now? He's tall and well built. But one thing hasn't changed, he's still lazy!" zamień na "He has changed since then. Now, he's tall and well-built, but still lazy." To ostatnie zdanie nie pasowało, bo nie powinno się zaczynać zdania od "but", więc trochę to zmodyfikowałem by normalnie wyglądało.

Reszta jest chyba dobrze, no chyba że czegoś nie zauważyłem.

[Marchwj]

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