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[Degistive]

For many years white people hate Indians. This happened
because the Indians did not know anything about white people, and white people
did not know anything about Indians. Could not get away without fighting, as
both races get met. I experienced unforgettable days with them, and I would
like to make a difference. In this letter I would like to describe my
experience with the Indians. Everyone knows Indians as savage(wild) people, but
it is not. They live just like we do. They have feelings like we do(have).
Riding on horses, just like us. The only difference is that we have more stuff.
By stuff, I mean clothes, cars and weapons. One day the Indians attacked me,
they did not expect that white people have guns. And then began my advanture
with a stranger. The next day I was visited by vicechief of indian. They
visited me because they wanted to learn more about white people. Some, of
course, were opposed. The problem was that the Indians could not speak English.
And I could not the Indian language. The first days were difficult but over
time we have learned to understand each other. Each day, the Indians came up to
me and learned new things. I showed them the coffee grinder, our clothes, and
of course weapons. But they taught me language, and showed their village. I met
an Indian woman which 20 years ago was living in England. She was very clever
and very beautiful woman. Unfortunately she could bad English, but it came just
in time. The Indians began to trust me and connect us special kind of
friendship. (Łączył nas) The Indians showed me how they can live. Every day, we
sat in the hut at the fire and talked about the problems. Indians was most feared attack by white people. I
explained to them that not everyone is like me, and not everyone can be
trusted. Not only were afraid of white people, but the other Indians who lived
like savages. I told that I will always help them in every situation that
comes. I was no longer a white man, but part of the Indians. I loved them with
all my heart, and one day I got married to a beautiful Indian woman.

 

 

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